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Joannak Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 121Indiana, USA |
Chain saws, motor boats, lawn mowers, jet skis - buzzing mechanical bees. "I'm on vacation!", I cry, "Where is my peace and quiet?" jk What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write? Ray Bradbury |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Well-put! There aren't too many places to escape to any more. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Joannak, Vacations don't always go as expected, LOL. I think the form you are using here is tanka rather than senryu. Sounds like you need to find some loons and chill out. Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
You cant get no peace no where, good one  Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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