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Joannak Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 121Indiana, USA |
Softly, sound of waves splashing, broken only by haunting call of loon. ~ Solitary loon his mournful, echoing cry searching for his mate repeats his plantative call haunting my waking moments. ~ There! a silent loon gracefully swimming .... now gone diving for his meal. What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write? Ray Bradbury |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
It sounds as if you have found your peace and quiet after all! I enjoyed this, and also love loons. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Since I'm a Canadian I love loons, they are beautiful as were your haikus and tanka! I love the first haiku...amazing!  Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Joannak, Beautiful poetry collection about the loon, a delightful subject for a haiku/tanka. Good imagery used here. Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Simply beautiful, you're choice of words was so poetic! Ellie |
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