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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Lending light though dark, Chasing dreams Firery beams, Dances in the night. There are enough colours in the world, To paint your own dreams, You won't get them, Till you try. |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
A rainbow of hope........very fine. jon |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
thanks Jon  Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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CitiZen-One Member
since 2000-09-22
Posts 84New Mexico |
very cute and sweet. |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
thanks for reading citizen-one Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
haiku's have never been my thing....ah but Maria....fireflies....they have been friends since childhood...thank you my dear...you please as well as they do Sol |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
I like the idea of "Lending light through dark" and do love to watch them dance. Well done. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I must write a haiku one of these days..lovely.. |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Sol - Mine too, thanks for reading KCS - Thank u Victoria - Go on, One you write one, u'll write a thousand Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Maria, Felt like a little of summer left over in this one, could see the sparks dancing...well done!!! Bonnie |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
BSC - thank u Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Maria that was beautiful! Very descriptive. Elizabeth Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near... [email protected] |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Elizabeth thank u for your thoughts Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Maria, A wonderful description of the fleeting dreams that dance through our subconcienceness while we slumber. Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Maria, your best haiku yet! I love the second line "chasing dreams fiery beams" very unique and well expressed!Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Dennis - How did you know it was a dream And thank u Melissa - Thank u also, means a lot Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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