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Moon Dust
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0 posted 2000-10-04 03:57 PM


Lending light though dark,
Chasing dreams Firery beams,
Dances in the night.

There are enough colours in the world,
To paint your own dreams,
You won't get them,
Till you try.


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Jon Mewett
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1 posted 2000-10-05 04:20 AM


A rainbow of hope........very fine.

jon

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2 posted 2000-10-05 03:51 PM


thanks Jon

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


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3 posted 2000-10-05 05:12 PM


very cute and sweet.
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4 posted 2000-10-05 06:17 PM


thanks for reading citizen-one

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


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5 posted 2000-10-05 10:49 PM


haiku's have never been my thing....ah but Maria....fireflies....they have been friends since childhood...thank you my dear...you please as well as they do  

Sol  

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6 posted 2000-10-05 10:54 PM


I like the idea of "Lending light through dark" and do love to watch them dance.  Well done.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

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7 posted 2000-10-06 12:22 PM


I must write a haiku one of these days..lovely..
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8 posted 2000-10-06 02:03 PM


Sol - Mine too,  thanks for reading

KCS - Thank u

Victoria - Go on, One you write one, u'll write a thousand

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


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9 posted 2000-10-07 03:32 PM


Maria, Felt like a little of summer left over in this one, could see the sparks dancing...well done!!!  Bonnie
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10 posted 2000-10-07 03:43 PM


BSC - thank u

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


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11 posted 2000-10-07 10:44 PM


Maria that was beautiful! Very descriptive.

Elizabeth


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12 posted 2000-10-08 09:13 AM


Elizabeth thank u for your thoughts

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


Dennis L. White
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13 posted 2000-10-08 08:30 PM


Maria,
  A wonderful description of the fleeting dreams that dance through our subconcienceness while we slumber.
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)


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14 posted 2000-10-09 12:19 PM



Maria, your best haiku yet!    I love the second line "chasing dreams fiery beams" very unique and well expressed!

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams



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15 posted 2000-10-09 04:30 PM


Dennis - How did you know it was a dream And thank u

Melissa - Thank u also, means a lot

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


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