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Mrobi3543
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since 2000-03-12
Posts 29
Philadelphia, PA

0 posted 2000-10-08 01:59 AM


just once...just once before i die
i want someone to acknowledge my heart
this acknowledgement must be in the form of utter and complete devotion
i want someone to completely understand what it is that i have to provide
the immense love i have has never been harnessed by one person yet
most people turn it into a "he's a great guy...a great friend"
not one person, to this day, has said that my love is something that has caused them to stop and think - "is this the perfect person for me?"

i wonder...does my heart, what i understand is my heart - my love...does it appear somehow different to others
do others perceive my heart differently than what i know it is?
does my heart appear so commonplace that it is in no way of any desire to anyone?
i would like to believe that no heart is ever commonplace
strangely, this is the impression i get

someday soon i hope to have answers to my questions and wishes
until then i'll continue being friend to many, love to none

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Moon Dust
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since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK
1 posted 2000-10-08 08:39 AM


Being friends is a very good start, I'm sure you'll find all you want. Niice Poem btw

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


Brenda Hall
Member
since 2000-05-30
Posts 88
Texas,USA
2 posted 2000-10-08 04:39 PM


Hi!

I liked your poem,although it is sad,that someone has not looked in your Heart and Soul and see what a wounderful human being you are.

I can relate to your delemma,for I have suffered the same alienation.I feel that is it the worlds' loss if they have not given me a chance to show what riches I have to offer them. I am poor financially,but have the 'pot o'gold' at the end of the rainbow,if only given a chance to present this part of me.

Hang in there,Love may be right around the corner!

GBU!

Brenda H.

kcsgrandma
Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
3 posted 2000-10-08 06:26 PM


I think there may be a lot of us on here who have felt something similar to this.  In fact, I also wrote on a similar theme, something I may post sometime.  But it's true, friendship is a great place to start.  Don't give up.  Someone will see, and it will be worth the wait.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

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