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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Memories ~*Marge Tindal*~ You will come again to rest upon my lips as a smile To enlighten my night in dreams erstwhile You will return once more to rapturous moments regain Beyond times forgotten past heartache and pain Held as a memory in the book of my dreams Soft casual glances of everseem ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
And a beautiful book of dreams it will be Marge. This is written so gently, while holding those memories so precious. Bonnie |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge, my friend, Oh how i love this one. 'held as a memory in the book of my dreams' this is so beautiful and loving. you've put a smile on my face with this one my friend. love you bunches, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
ooooh, Marge, I love the flow and beauty of this poem. Positively ethereal! Love, Ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Brought back a few of my own. Love it Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
You will come again to rest upon my lips as a smile To enlighten my night in dreams erstwhile What a beautiful image! When I am gone, I hope I might be a smile on somebody's lips. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, very beautiful, Marge! Denise |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Marge, Beautiful, surreal and tender look at treasured moments. Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bonnie~ Thank you for recognizing the gentleness. That's just the way it felt to me. Vicky~ Ahhh ! The smile - yes ! Ellie~ So very pleased it touched you. Maria~ Thank you - it served it's purpose well. KCS~ I think we'd all like that. I know I would too. Denise~ Thanks for enjoying it. Dennis~ Thank you for seeing the tender in it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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