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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-10-08 01:52 PM



Memories
~*Marge Tindal*~

You will come again to rest
upon my lips as a smile
To enlighten my night
in dreams erstwhile

You will return once more
to rapturous moments regain
Beyond times forgotten
past heartache and pain

Held as a memory
in the book of my dreams
Soft casual glances
of everseem





~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com



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1 posted 2000-10-08 02:31 PM


And a beautiful book of dreams it will be Marge.  This is written so gently, while holding those memories so precious.  Bonnie
vlraynes
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2 posted 2000-10-08 02:44 PM



Marge, my friend,
   Oh how i love this one.  

         'held as a memory
      in the book of my dreams'

   this is so beautiful and loving.
   you've put a smile on my face
   with this one my friend.  

   love you bunches,
            -vicky



        


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes


ellie LeJeune
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3 posted 2000-10-08 03:05 PM


ooooh, Marge, I love the flow and beauty of this poem. Positively ethereal! Love, Ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

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4 posted 2000-10-08 05:12 PM


Brought back a few of my own. Love it

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


kcsgrandma
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5 posted 2000-10-08 06:31 PM


You will come again to rest
upon my lips as a smile
To enlighten my night
in dreams erstwhile

What a beautiful image!  When I am gone, I hope I might be a smile on somebody's lips.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Denise
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6 posted 2000-10-08 07:48 PM


Yes, very beautiful, Marge!  

Denise

Dennis L. White
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7 posted 2000-10-08 07:53 PM


Marge,
  Beautiful, surreal and tender look at treasured moments.
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)


Marge Tindal
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8 posted 2000-10-08 08:01 PM


Bonnie~
Thank you for recognizing the gentleness.
That's just the way it felt to me.

Vicky~
Ahhh !  The smile - yes !

Ellie~
So very pleased it touched you.

Maria~
Thank you - it served it's purpose well.

KCS~
I think we'd all like that.
I know I would too.

Denise~
Thanks for enjoying it.

Dennis~
Thank you for seeing the tender in it.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com



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