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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
Cascades of perfume... Would bewitch my mind... A tender touch my heart... All I have are pictures though... Which at least must be a start. A prelude to a rendezvous... A bottle message I can find... Floating through the ether void... To wash up in my mind. Upon the shore I stand... Content to play this part... Praying now for refuge... From the shipwreck of my heart. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SolticeSon~ Yeah ! I like it ! ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
* smiles softly * Thanks Marge...when I first hopped online..I never dreamed I would meet people who could so easily pull the rug out from under me....this poem is for all of them... sol ![]() |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
This is soooo pretty, Solstice Son ![]() Your poem reminds me of one I wrote last or two years ago about being shipwrecked. Maybe I'll dig it out of the archives. ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. -me, Song of Gesture |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Beutiful, sooo romantic! Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Romance is NOT dead..........Nice Jon |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
*blinks* Cool, hon. This is really cool. ![]() With a little piece of tomorrow, You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye. Because today won't last forever, And the past will only make you cry. |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
I like this. I hope someone comes along to rescue you. Keith W. Mullin Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you. |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
Oh my...i was gone when everyone replied to this...that or i was getting lazy in my replying...either way... Thank You everyone....it was one of those sweet bits that just flows out right the first time...thanks you sweet people.. Sol ![]() |
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DawnG![]() ![]()
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
This is really pretty. I like it too. Dawn |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
Thank you Callie...its one of my favorites to be sure ![]() Sol ![]() |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Sol~ This is sad, but a great write. Deb |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
Deb darlin, aye..it's sad...but thanks be to the God of poetry....for helping us make sadness something beautiful at times .. ![]() Sol ![]() |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
Sol, This is beautiful...you always come up with different ways to express things...it's purely wonderful. Best |
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