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kid D Member
since 2000-10-18
Posts 64 |
...by a jury of your peers as you saw it i was surely guilty well i should say guilty as you define it to be diffusing the situation pretrial or so i thought i handed you a gun loaded with my apology how was i to know that you planned to turn it on yourself melodramatically never hit the ground held up by the arms of the many dictionary toting fans waiting to hear testimony the bleeding was purely for effect this was obvious but only i could see that with a gag i could have stopped it easily linguistics and theatrics kept the many enthralled and i knew when i was out numbered so i offered you a thesaurus to aid in your self-defense put away the gun and any more apologies as i headed out the door the fans were witnessing the truth well, i should say the truth as you define it to be [This message has been edited by kid D (edited 10-30-2000).] |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
kid D, I love this. A jury of your peers is always the hardest to convince. Alicia |
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kid D Member
since 2000-10-18
Posts 64 |
well anyone who has ever worked in an office situation (and refused to play the game their way) will have felt this  thanks for your comments |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
oh, yeah..been there, Kid..well done. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
You should get time off for good behavior for writing this, kid. I work in a profession which specializes in words and language, and the differences of opinion can be intense, and those who are supposed to know are NOT always right. Well done!To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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epoet Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291grand rapid,MI, usa |
nice one kid. really interesting way of putting this into your point of view. been on both sides of the coin. see if you can write one from the other side of this one. P. J. Kotrch carpe diem A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love |
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kid D Member
since 2000-10-18
Posts 64 |
pegasus and kcsgrandma, thank you much epoet, thank you, for the comment and the food for thought, I currently have this in another forum, where the critique so far has prompted a major rewrite(and confusion as to where i wanted this to go in the first place)...but i like your idea, maybe writing one from the other side will help my thinking processes |
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