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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 2000-10-02 08:20 AM


Beyond

Beyond the pockets full of stone
Sticks and other things unknown

Below the scruffy head of hair
Beneath the bandaged knee somewhere

The hanging shirtail out of place
And scuffed up sneakers still unlaced

Beyond the peanut butter face
There is an angel full of grace

Elizabeth Santos

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Solstice Son
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since 2000-09-19
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1 posted 2000-10-02 08:36 AM


this made me smile hun..not from watching my own boy...but from all the times I would come home like the afore mentioned angel  

thanks..in the few moments it took to read...i went back about twenty years in time...thank you so very much..

Sol  

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2000-10-02 01:35 PM


Elizabeth~
This is just the most precious little thing I've read today.
Put a smile on this mommy's face ...
had lots of those little peanut butter faces in my day.
Love ya' to pieces !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com



Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

3 posted 2000-10-02 02:49 PM


Hey that was me that was...........still is a little bit

Jon

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4 posted 2000-10-02 03:50 PM


All little boys are the same This one made me smile

There are enough colours in the world,
To paint your own dreams,
You won't get them,
Till you try.


Denise
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5 posted 2000-10-02 08:17 PM


This is delightful, Elizabeth! Precious!

Denise

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
6 posted 2000-10-02 11:37 PM


Liz; Delightful! I have a 4 year old grandson and this is a perfect picture of him. love, Ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
7 posted 2000-10-03 12:08 PM


Yes, this is for everyone who has ever been or loved a little boy.  Add my smile to the rest.  

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Daniel J D
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since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia
8 posted 2000-10-04 01:19 AM


Real down to earth. Fun and joy with a little reality. Good on you!


Chanson
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since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle
9 posted 2000-10-04 01:35 AM


Elizabeth, these are well-writ couplets and I'm chuckling at the pictures you created...Peanut butter face, the who-knows-what-else found in pockets. So cute      

...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-me, Song of Gesture



Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
10 posted 2000-10-04 05:39 AM


Thank you all for your comments. I raised 3 sons and a daughter(completely different) and now I have 4 grandsons. It's amazing what comes out of those pockets!
I just love little boys
Liz

Lost Dreamer
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Somewhere near the Rainbow
11 posted 2000-10-09 10:48 PM


Oh, this poem is just so precious, you brought a smile to my face remembering those days  
CitiZen-One
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Posts 84
New Mexico
12 posted 2000-10-10 04:43 PM


A sweet piece.
bestgirl911
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Clio, MI , United We Stand
13 posted 2000-10-10 05:23 PM


This one brought a smile to my face. Anyone with kids can appreciate this. bestgirl
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