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Solstice Son
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since 2000-09-19
Posts 469


0 posted 2000-09-27 08:41 AM


Do you know why I like chocoalte??
not just because its sweet...
true , that helps, but it's what it does,
thatmakes me feel complete.

See there's this thing in chocolate,
a chemical that's free...
the same one that sits in your head
til a new lover you may see.

You feel the quickness in your heart,
the shortness in your breath,
and if that someone , dared to touch,
it may surely mean your death.

now , sometimes, when I'm lonely,
then I start to feel a need,
for a lover's sweet embrace,
made for only me.

but often, I don't feel it,
her gift to soothe my need,
so I find a bag of chocolate,
and my loneliness I feed.

© Copyright 2000 Adam M.M. Stevanovic' - All Rights Reserved
kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
1 posted 2000-09-27 11:07 PM


Love this!   Glad to know chocolate does as much for the guys as it does for us gals.
Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

2 posted 2000-09-28 04:11 AM


I like those soft gooey centres......really nice.

Jon

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Skelmersdale, UK
3 posted 2000-09-28 07:45 PM


mmmmm chocolate
Your right its the perfect subitute

There are enough colours in the world,
To paint your own dreams,
You won't get them,
Till you try.


Solstice Son
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since 2000-09-19
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4 posted 2000-09-28 08:01 PM


....I am one of the few men I know who actually craves chocolate...my wife thinks I am crazy...but happily obliges..*L* so we always have chocolate SOMEWHERE in the house...thanks for the comments and kudos everyone...

Sol

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