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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2000-09-26 07:26 PM


The hard pouring rain
Worms are washed up everywhere
Banquet for the birds

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vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
1 posted 2000-09-26 07:50 PM




       worms on rain-drenched ground
        breakfast for the early birds
               what a slimey treat

ellie-
   this is really cute.  enjoyed it much.    
  
   love,
      vicky
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Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

2 posted 2000-09-27 02:55 AM


This is a slipppery one Ellie.........yeeek!


Jon

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
3 posted 2000-09-27 02:41 PM


Ellie,
Worms treading water
To busy to notice bird
Soon will be his lunch

oh boy worms!
Dennis :^)

Moon Dust
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since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK
4 posted 2000-09-28 06:59 PM


it raining there too?

There are enough colours in the world,
To paint your own dreams,
You won't get them,
Till you try.


WEEBEE3
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since 2000-09-28
Posts 36

5 posted 2000-09-28 07:16 PM


Watery Buffet
The first come are the first served
This is for the Birds!

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