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twilah
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since 2000-09-25
Posts 91
Maine, USA

0 posted 2000-09-27 04:51 PM


At times when all alone,
Deep longing comes over me;
Unexplained even to myself,
No clear reason can I see.

Something, unknown to me,
Keeps pulling me from without;
Dissatisfaction envelopes me,
Filling me with doubt.

A picture fills my mind, of
A cottage by the ocean;
Scenes are played out now,
AS if in slow motion.

I see the winding path,
That leads to the front door;
Such quaintness lies inside,
I long to see much more.

Kneeling by the fireplace,
I picture a familiar scene;
Of another time and moment,
When with my love I dreamed

Of such a place, a haven
To escape the world about;
To love and laugh, but most
Of all, to hopefully shut out

The world around us. Enjoying
Each other, exploring, loving;
Knowing it's only temporary,
We keep taking and giving.

I am drawn back to the present,
My thoughts no longer my own;
Memory itself has succeeded to
Make my longings known.

These longings will continue to
Control my heart and mind;
Until I put away the mem'ries,
And leave them all behind.

But my heart is not willing
To let go..I hold on fast;
For mem'ries are all I have
To remind me of the past.

Twilah


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kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
1 posted 2000-09-27 06:05 PM


This is very sad.  Sometimes it is hard to let go of memories, even when they are painful, because they are all we have.  I hope the hurt goes away soon, and leaves only sweetness.
twilah
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since 2000-09-25
Posts 91
Maine, USA
2 posted 2000-09-27 08:03 PM


Thank you, M...I know you understand where I am coming from.....Twilah..
Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

3 posted 2000-09-28 04:10 AM


Yeah memories can be painful.......but they can also give you a strength of spirit ........and sometimes in reflection you are grateful even for bad things.

your poem says this well

jon

twilah
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since 2000-09-25
Posts 91
Maine, USA
4 posted 2000-09-28 07:13 AM


Yes, you are right, Jon...it does strengthen my spirit...you are very perceptive...Twilah
Moon Dust
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since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177
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5 posted 2000-09-28 07:06 PM


never block out the memorys tho they are who you are

There are enough colours in the world,
To paint your own dreams,
You won't get them,
Till you try.


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