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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2000-09-17 03:56 PM

Late Summer sunbeams
Dancing a ballet Divine
to gardens Swan Song!

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Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

[This message has been edited by ellie LeJeune (edited 09-17-2000).]

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

1 posted 2000-09-17 04:18 PM

~Ellie~

This is a beautifully written haiku! I love the elegance and majesty of a swan

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-09-17 07:56 PM

Very lovely, Ellie!

Denise

BSC

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since 2000-02-04

Posts 2919
New York, USA

3 posted 2000-09-17 07:59 PM

Ah yes Ellie, my gardens are in the midst of their swan song....Beautiful little gem!!! Bonnie

Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04

Posts 1304

4 posted 2000-09-18 04:08 AM

Beautiful image.....lovely writing

Jon

Moon Dust

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since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

5 posted 2000-09-19 05:53 PM

this one reminds me of summer

There are enough colours in the world,
To paint your own dreams,
You won't get them,
Till you try.

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

6 posted 2000-09-20 11:41 AM

Ellie,
As summer doth fade
New delights will come our way
Swan song echos still

Nice imagery in your haiku
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

7 posted 2001-05-07 12:44 PM

very nice images...always liked the swans

~DreamChild~
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since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

8 posted 2001-05-07 02:06 PM

great imagery! this is a beautiful haiku. thanks for sharing.

Dopey Dope

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since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

9 posted 2001-05-13 05:05 PM

SO BEAUTIFUL!
Well done!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

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Idaho, USA

10 posted 2001-05-13 10:10 PM

Beautiful! I really like this.

Betty Lou Hebert

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