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~DreamChild~
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since 2001-04-23
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in your dreams

0 posted 2001-05-09 02:01 PM



I should have thought about it first;
considered the pain, the misery, the hurt
before i screwed up - again - this time
and foolishly strung my heart on the line.

I should have remembered my past mistakes;
considered the wager that was at stake
before I anted into this game
and lost it all, once, and again

I should've seen the end was near,
but I kept you in my heart, so dear.
Of your sweet love, would not let go,
but it was too late, i should have known...

DEDICATED TO ALL OF MY HEART-BREAKING BEAUTIES
~DreamChild~

© Copyright 2001 derrick gillum - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2001-05-09 06:00 PM


Hope they are still speaking to you.  this is fun.  joyce
Lady Raven
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since 2001-04-30
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2 posted 2001-05-13 10:26 PM


Nice poem, sad but nice. All your beauties huh? I wouldn't happen to be one of them would I???? I hope not...I wouldn't want to make you that sad. Keep up the good poems!!
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