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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere 
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You said you wanted to know me So I opened up my soul Showed you things about me No one else knows I bared it all to you The happiness and pain I had nothing left to lose And everything to gain And when you saw the truth The face behind my mask You said you'd stay by me Showing me a love that would last But today I watched as you Gently kissed another Never knowing I was standing there You wrapped your arms around each other So I stepped back in the shadows Turned and walked away The mask slides back into place Hiding damage caused today The next time that I see you I'll try hard not to cry And I'll do my best to stay strong Through our final goodbye. With a little piece of tomorrow, You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye. Because today won't last forever, And the past will only make you cry. |
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Lonelypoet Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 123Conklin,NY,USA |
Broken_winged_angel, Great Poem!!!!!! I loved every word of it. I probably liked it because I felt alittle Dejas vous in there... There's a difference between knowing a path and walking that path.... |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
bwangel...wow..this is really a sad one--can feel the anguish..well written i must say.. its hard to bare your soul sometimes, aye.. and when the trust is gone, it often takes even longer the next time to trust..if this is a now and true event, i'm hoping for you that things look up soon  hugs, dg "i'm growin'/ i dont like it/ i'm growin' and it hurts/ i love you/ but i'm tired/ i guess i've got a lot to learn..." -w. watson |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
Wow. As I read this poem, butterflies swarmed in my stomach.....I went through the same exact thing. I don't let anyone close to me...and if I do, it takes a lot. My last love who I gave my heart to did the same thing to me...except worse and now the product is 5 months old. I feel so sorry for anyone who has ever had to go through such a terrible thing. As my mom always says "Time Heals".......beth "And I still believe you can never have too much fiction because reality is such a bore..." - REA |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very well expressed, BWA. Beautifully done. Denise |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
LonelyPoet...Thankyou very much...It's a feeling that I wish no one would ever put another through, but some of us simple humans don't seem to be that compassionate. dgvarner...It's not a now event, but it is true...A man I gave everything to cheated on me a while ago, and yes, it was more than just a kiss...Anyhow, we met again and he wants to re-kindle our relationship. I thought maybe writing this would explain to him a little better why I'm so hesitant..Thankyou.. Lady Lost...Thankyou very much...Your moms' a smart woman..  dsynder...Thankyou...Your words mean a lot. With a little piece of tomorrow, You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye. Because today won't last forever, And the past will only make you cry. |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
May the mask be dropped and broken into a million pieces so you may have to never wear it again! You've expressed yourself well BWA! ~Sheri |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
*sniffles* Alas...the harsh truth of heartbreak... --Little Girl |
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MichaelD New Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 1 |
Extremely good..Brings back to many memories of the day of getting dumped. Pulls at the heart strings. Michael |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
wonderful, amazing, beautiful, true. tears. alicia p*s~)masks are so untrue, and although you think they shelter you, often, they end up hurting more than healing. |
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nicolette Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 42St. Paul, Minnesota |
You expressed the feelings of hurt so well. Another great poem. Thank you. |
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