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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa 
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distant drum sound echos chill the valley fear paints it's face the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
This sooo neat! What a unique idea! ellie |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
thank you Ellie..you seem to be the only one who likes it..lol the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
nonsense,pegasus111, i always enjoyed your thoughtful haikus and this one is no exception  fret not,friend,u keep posting your haikus and i will keep commenting on them |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
oh I didnt see this one Love the sound of drums Words flow heavily, A carbon copy of my heart, As well as my soul. |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
Kaile, Maria..thank you my friends the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Sage Elizabeth New Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 9 |
Hi, I'm glad that I stopped in on this one. It's got a feeling to it that remains with me long after the words are read. Wonderful work. Sage |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
sage, you are very kind. thank you the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
very nice, I love the last line! |
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