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Moon Dust
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0 posted 2000-09-13 03:22 PM


Busy bumble bee,
Buzz along Honey coated dreams,
Seek out your treat.
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pegasus111
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1 posted 2000-09-13 05:05 PM

this is teriffic..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost
ellie LeJeune
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2 posted 2000-09-13 05:46 PM

Bee-eautiful!
Honeybee
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3 posted 2000-09-14 08:38 AM



Well this honeybee thinks this is a perfect haiku!  I loved the second line  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee  

The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams
kaile
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4 posted 2000-09-14 11:45 AM

Maria, i liked the alliteration scheme of the first line...it somehow reminds me of the buzzing sound the honeybee makes


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