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ellie LeJeune
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0 posted 2000-09-11 06:25 PM


Snow melts Springs first kiss
Planted on Summers sweet lips
that sigh in Fall's haze


[This message has been edited by ellie LeJeune (edited 09-11-2000).]

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Moon Dust
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1 posted 2000-09-11 06:31 PM


Lovely decription of 4 seasons in so little words

Words flow heavily,
A carbon copy of my heart,
As well as my soul.

Alle'cram
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2 posted 2000-09-11 11:54 PM


you did it, Ms. Ellie, Challenge well met!  
BSC
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3 posted 2000-09-12 08:45 AM


WOW Ellie....What a wonderful job you have done with this little beauty.... Oh queen of haiku's you have my humble admiration!  Bonnie
Dennis L. White
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4 posted 2000-09-12 09:01 AM


Sis,
Yes, another year has gone bye....Uuh,
I mean you have captured the four seasons so wonderfully! Queen of Haiku? I hope I'm invited to the coronation! LOL
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)


Mike
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5 posted 2000-09-12 01:08 PM


Nicely written... enjoyed.
kaile
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6 posted 2000-09-14 11:32 AM


from a budding haikuist to another, i say this was very well done

thank u for responding

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