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gofor42 Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 143Arkansas |
I lost myself at some point along the way. Somewhere on the road between "Here" and "There," I left the path. Irrevocably set on some distant point, I stumble toward my destiny. Eventually, I can go no further, And my inert body spralls under the hot sun. To continue would require a stronger Desire to live than I possess, So I lie motionless and defeated. In the years to come, My story will be told as a warning, A clear message to others who stray from the path: "To leave is to die," they'll say, And my soul will scream out against them. That is not the message I want to send! The only thing that saved me was to become lost. Had I not strayed, I would never have found My true path. Greatness was never reached By following someone else's road. "If you can't annoy somebody, there's little point in writing." --Kingsley Amis |
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DawnG![]() ![]()
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
What a great poem. You should post more often, I always love your works. ![]() Dawn |
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jenifeather Junior Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 31Here |
great poem and great message to give other people. keep it up. jennifer who's gonna pay attention, to your dreams who's gonna plug their ears, when you scream -the cars |
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Wendy Flora Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 182Virginia |
this was absolutely amazing. you know i've been reading your work for a LONG time, and this is probably the best thing you've ever done. I am very impressed, and very proud. (I've taught you well - wink) love ya bud. call me. -wen |
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Wendy Flora Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 182Virginia |
p.s. it's "sprawls" not 'spralls' you've been in AR toooo long!!! *wink* |
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