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Moon Dust
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0 posted 2000-09-12 06:46 PM


The cold winters disappear,
Before my eyes,
Without question,
And you are here,
The dark cloud of depression,
Has seemed to disappear,
In a moment passed,
For something so impossible,
And Something with little chance,
Will cease to amaze me,
And Dreams to be answered,
As they rarely do,
And a understanding,
As it's coming from you,
My wings take flight,
For all your love,
For missing you already,
I know you'll be back,
Sometimes soon,
I hope.



Words flow heavily,
A carbon copy of my heart,
As well as my soul.

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pegasus111
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1 posted 2000-09-12 06:55 PM


absence does make the heart grow fonder..very nice piece.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Moon Dust
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2 posted 2000-09-12 06:59 PM


pegasus, thanks

Words flow heavily,
A carbon copy of my heart,
As well as my soul.

DawnG
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3 posted 2000-09-12 11:25 PM


Maria,

This is a great piece. My Mom is moving away soon, next week, and this is kinda describing my feelings on her moving. Sorry if I read my own interpretation into it. If it helps though I did find a little comfort i my own interpretation.

                                   Dawn

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4 posted 2000-09-13 02:23 PM


Dawn - You can have your own interpretations, just glad I could help

Words flow heavily,
A carbon copy of my heart,
As well as my soul.

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