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Mike
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0 posted 2000-09-12 01:21 PM



Cool is the whisper of breezes at dawn,
The kiss of morn's dew, on emerald green lawn,
Smell of sweet jasmine, angelic bouquet,
Soft glow of sun's rising, advent of new day.

© Copyright 2000 Mike - All Rights Reserved
blackhalo
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since 2000-02-15
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1 posted 2000-09-12 01:43 PM


This is absolutely beautiful!  "In the garden of life, friends are the flowers!"
Alicia

DawnG
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2 posted 2000-09-12 02:00 PM


Mike,

I too must say what a beautiful poem. The title caught my eye right away.  

                                   Dawn

Alle'cram
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3 posted 2000-09-12 02:17 PM


Mike, I love this!! Refreshing and filled with peace within, shared with the reader.  
ellie LeJeune
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4 posted 2000-09-12 06:35 PM


Mike; I love the picture you have painted with your talented poets pen. Beautiful, beautiful poem. Ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

Denise
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5 posted 2000-09-12 08:17 PM


Very beautiful morning, Mike!  

Denise

Mike
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6 posted 2000-09-13 11:58 AM


Thank you all for your gracious replies.  Glad you enjoyed my little poem.
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