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Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
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Michigan, U.S.A.

0 posted 2000-09-12 11:40 AM


I lift up my eyes
To the twilight skies
As I feel the rush,
Of an angels soft hush.

I feel the breeze,
As an angel did squeeze
Past without stutter,
Its wing softly flutter.

Surrounded by love,
Sweet care from above,
My senses dwell
In this celestial spell.

So peaceful and calm
Soothed by heavens balm,
My soul gives praise
For thy marvelous ways!



© Copyright 2000 Dennis L. White - All Rights Reserved
blackhalo
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since 2000-02-15
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Denver, CO
1 posted 2000-09-12 12:19 PM


Dennis,
I am left speechless.  So wonderfully descriptive.
Alicia

Mike
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2 posted 2000-09-12 01:23 PM


Very nicely written.  Liked the poem.
DawnG
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3 posted 2000-09-12 02:02 PM


I really like this Dennis. Thanks for sharing.  

                               Dawn

Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
4 posted 2000-09-12 02:23 PM


Dennis, Wonderful job and mellowing for sure. I like where your thoughts and heart were, when writing this lovely poem. Marcy
ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
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King of Prussia, PA USA
5 posted 2000-09-12 06:32 PM


Dennis; Ethereal and so enchanting. Sounds like you had a very incredible experience.
A glorious poem! Sis

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
6 posted 2000-09-12 07:48 PM


Your poem here is heavenly! Sensitive- soothing and so wonderfully calming!  I continue to be amazed (though I shouldn't be) by the vastness of your insights/feelings/and marvelous expressiveness!  Keep up the wonderful sharings of yourself Brother!  Love, David

WOW- another day of life-and here among friends!
Ain't God Grand!



Denise
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7 posted 2000-09-12 08:21 PM


Wonderful and inspiring, Dennis!

Denise

vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
8 posted 2000-09-12 10:06 PM



dennis-
  this is absolutely beautiful.
  i love it!  

  -vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet.
                -vlraynes

Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2000-09-12 10:12 PM


Dennis~
This soft angelic flutter is a vision to behold.
So very, very lovely.
Thank you for sharing this little gem.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com



dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
10 posted 2000-09-12 10:26 PM


sigh...you melt my heart....     wonderful words you write...!  so beautifully put together...

hugs, dg  


"i'm growin'/ i dont like it/ i'm growin' and it hurts/ i love you/ but i'm tired/ i guess i've got a lot to learn..." -w. watson

Broken_Winged_Angel
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since 2000-04-06
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Small Town, Somewhere
11 posted 2000-09-13 03:09 AM


Very describtive and wonderfully put..I enjoyed this as much as all of your other poetry..  

With a little piece of tomorrow,
You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye.
Because today won't last forever,
And the past will only make you cry.

jenifeather
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since 2000-02-21
Posts 31
Here
12 posted 2000-09-13 03:36 PM


nicely written. so gentle and beautiful.

jennifer


who's gonna pay attention, to your dreams
who's gonna plug their ears, when you scream
-the cars

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