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Angel Rush |
Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
I lift up my eyes To the twilight skies As I feel the rush, Of an angels soft hush. I feel the breeze, As an angel did squeeze Past without stutter, Its wing softly flutter. Surrounded by love, Sweet care from above, My senses dwell In this celestial spell. So peaceful and calm Soothed by heavens balm, My soul gives praise For thy marvelous ways! |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Dennis, I am left speechless. So wonderfully descriptive. Alicia |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Very nicely written. Liked the poem. |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
I really like this Dennis. Thanks for sharing. Dawn |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Dennis, Wonderful job and mellowing for sure. I like where your thoughts and heart were, when writing this lovely poem. Marcy |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dennis; Ethereal and so enchanting. Sounds like you had a very incredible experience. A glorious poem! Sis Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Your poem here is heavenly! Sensitive- soothing and so wonderfully calming! I continue to be amazed (though I shouldn't be) by the vastness of your insights/feelings/and marvelous expressiveness! Keep up the wonderful sharings of yourself Brother! Love, David WOW- another day of life-and here among friends! Ain't God Grand! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wonderful and inspiring, Dennis! Denise |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dennis- this is absolutely beautiful. i love it! -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dennis~ This soft angelic flutter is a vision to behold. So very, very lovely. Thank you for sharing this little gem. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
sigh...you melt my heart.... wonderful words you write...! so beautifully put together... hugs, dg "i'm growin'/ i dont like it/ i'm growin' and it hurts/ i love you/ but i'm tired/ i guess i've got a lot to learn..." -w. watson |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Very describtive and wonderfully put..I enjoyed this as much as all of your other poetry.. With a little piece of tomorrow, You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye. Because today won't last forever, And the past will only make you cry. |
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jenifeather Junior Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 31Here |
nicely written. so gentle and beautiful. jennifer who's gonna pay attention, to your dreams who's gonna plug their ears, when you scream -the cars |
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