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Lonely Shadow
Member

since 2000-03-14

Posts 128
Virginia

0 posted 2000-09-11 10:50 PM

Here I lay in this cold and lonely place
this shallow grave dug just for me
then far off in the distant sky
a beautiful angel appears before my eyes
her beauty entrances me
Her enchanting song takes hold of my heart
slowly filling it with love and happiness
oh how I long to be with her
how precious angel... oh how I love you
when can I join you in heaven?
when can I see the beauty and passion in your eyes?
to hold you in my arms
to touch your gentle lips with mine
to make passionate love with you... my one true love
I look forward to the day
when we can be together always
when we can finally bring a little piece of heaven down to earth
to finally know the love from an angel... my love

To find love is to know true happiness... to hold the one you love is to hold everything... to look into their eyes is to see a glimpse of heaven... b

Alle'cram
Senior Member

since 2000-02-28

Posts 1816
Texas

1 posted 2000-09-11 11:58 PM

This is so very well written. Just beautiful and so touching. I enjoyed it very much.

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

2 posted 2000-09-12 01:32 AM

So beautifully romantic, and flows so perfectly. I love this! Ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

Honey Bunch
Member

since 2000-08-08

Posts 99
South Africa

3 posted 2000-09-12 02:38 AM

Beautifully romantic and no doubt expressing the wish of many. Very well done!

a_little_girl
Member

since 2000-05-08

Posts 307
San Alejandro, HI, USA

4 posted 2000-09-12 10:36 AM

*sniffles* Beautifully romantic, Lonely.
--Little Girl

poutprincess
Senior Member

since 2000-07-06

Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia

5 posted 2000-09-12 12:20 PM

so loving and so touching....a beautiful vision indeed!
*sigh*
~Dawn

"Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos

Lonely Shadow
Member

since 2000-03-14

Posts 128
Virginia

6 posted 2000-09-12 05:41 PM

Thank you all for your kind words... I'm glad that you like this poem. I wrote it for the woman I love... actually I wrote quite a few for her. She is my true love, she is my inspiration. Even though she is so far away, I love her with all of my heart... she is the most precious gift in my life. Once again... thank you so much.

To find love is to know true happiness... to hold the one you love is to hold everything... to look into their eyes is to see a glimpse of heaven... b

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

7 posted 2000-09-12 07:13 PM

Is a very moving piece

Words flow heavily,
A carbon copy of my heart,
As well as my soul.

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

8 posted 2000-09-12 11:31 PM

A lovely tribute to your true love. Congratulations.

Dawn

jenifeather
Junior Member

since 2000-02-21

Posts 31
Here

9 posted 2000-09-13 03:41 PM

very nice. descriptive and so so sweet. i wish a guy would write something like this about me. you are a beautiful writer.

jennifer

who's gonna pay attention, to your dreams
who's gonna plug their ears, when you scream
-the cars

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