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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Just who is this old man, < !signature-->Staring back at me? So familiar is his face, What could his name be? He's got some features, Quite similar to mine, Perhaps he's a relative, I'll find out in time. His brown eyes are prominent, With subtle crowsfeet grooves, As I look away from him, He mimics all my moves. In an unsure voice I ask, "Old man, what's your name?" As I ask this question, He echoes back the same. In that very instant, I begin to understand, My perpetual inner child, Has become this older man. The trouble with this mirror, Is that it doesn't lie, I've seen my souls reflection, And looked him in the eye. ................................................. I'm 18 on the inside but 50 on the outside, it's difficult some days, but I'm coping, LOL, Dennis:^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) [This message has been edited by Dennis L. White (edited 09-11-2000).] |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Well Dennis I don't think I've ever seen MYSELF in the mirror....it's never the self you feel it should be...I wonder why? This verse is so so true...a question never to be answered I guess. Nice Jon |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Dennis, This is great!! How cleverly you see yourself in the mirrow. Loved this one and written so very well. Love, Marcy |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
bro; has no one told you that the mirror lies! You are exactly as young as you feel! I loved this poem! LOL love, sis Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
This is great! Ryhme scheme and message all flow so well. I've looked in the mirror and asked myself, who is this person? It's odd. Again, great job! Joy |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Dennis i'm only 19 and I worry I am getting older Words flow heavily, A carbon copy of my heart, As well as my soul. |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Ouch Dear Brother, Reality is setting in-tho' it's not quite as bad- the eyesight also dims! But in my escape to face my shared predicament, I can only say--"they don't make mirrors like they they used to!" Love, David WOW- another day of life-and here among friends! Ain't God Grand! |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
dennis..my brother says hes "16 and holdin'"...i claim "18 and holdin"... stick with us "youngsters"! heehee..aint it great to be young stop looking in that mirror great poem..and wonderfully written! hugs, dg "i'm growin'/ i dont like it/ i'm growin' and it hurts/ i love you/ but i'm tired/ i guess i've got a lot to learn..." -w. watson |
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
This is wonderful Dennis, I have looked in that same mirror so many times! Usually I see my mother, and that's when I know I'm only 18.... cause that face looks just like she did when I was 18! Bonnie |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
dennis,thank you for e-mailing me this...this put a smile on my face..somedays i feel exactly like the old man in the poem but though some days too i feel as full of wonder as a child... hugs |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
dennis,thank you for e-mailing me this...this put a smile on my face..somedays i feel exactly like the old man in the poem but though some days too i feel as full of wonder as a child... hugs |
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jenifeather Junior Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 31Here |
i feel the same way sometimes. i'm only 17 but life definatly has taken ts toll on me. i love the poem. jennifer who's gonna pay attention, to your dreams who's gonna plug their ears, when you scream -the cars |
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