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MMoonchild
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since 2000-07-13
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0 posted 2000-09-11 01:40 PM



Awaiting the Dark...

she steals them
from my lips...
inhales them
from my breath...
she has taken them
from my mind...
I feel
impending death...
as she lays them
down before you
upon her/your velvet cloak
and in the dark
I am lonely...
longing for that
gentle stroke
what is left of thee...

my darkest
am not one to
share the touch...
of the strong, caressing
hands of yours
that I love
so very much
just remember
me
my visions
my eyes...
of deep gray/blue
those thighs
that hold on tight
my love...
my thoughts now
just of you....


Maureen
*2k




© Copyright 2000 Maureen - All Rights Reserved
blackhalo
Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO
1 posted 2000-09-11 01:46 PM


Maureen,
Wonderful.
"She has taken them
From my mind..."
Very nice.
Alicia

MMoonchild
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since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715
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2 posted 2000-09-11 03:04 PM


Alicia...thank you..don't I sound  selfish..hmmm  well I don't like to  have  something I love stolen from me...
~~smiles
Maureen

Alle'cram
Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
3 posted 2000-09-12 12:02 PM


Maureen, This is lovely!!...in a gentle direct way you've put your foot down, good girl!  Enjoyed much, Love, Marcy
Steve B
Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 140
Southern PA
4 posted 2000-09-13 09:02 PM


Maureen ~ I understand why you dont like having your love stolen from you,  and i think you know why I understand....   SB
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