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Joannak Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 121Indiana, USA |
Float on gentle breeze Flutter by, my butterfly Lighter than the air jk What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write? Ray Bradbury |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Joanna~ Very, very lovely. I love butterflies ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
ditto Marge's comments..i like them too  |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Joannak, Artist crafted wings Wafted on the gentle breeze Floating with such grace I love your butterfly haiku! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dance on the flower sing your summers ending song quiet majesty you have written a beautiful Haiku! Ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Yes, very, very lovely. |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
..yes your right, lighter than air (for sure around these parts-South). Good write. Marcy |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Wrap in your cocoon, Grow your deicate wings now, Soon to be revealed. Nice one;~) What I write and others read is your own experiance and perceptions. |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Hey you can't move for butterfly's around here....this is so nice it gave birth to a host of painted lovelies...nice writing. Jon |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Butterflies are amazing, beautiful creatures. Nice work. Alicia |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
very nice... enjoyed. |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Joanna, you have written another masterpiece. I envy you, having the time and focus to make such careful observations. Please continue to grace us with your inspiration(s). INclan |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow - simply beautiful like that of the butterfly. I love butterflies and your haiku showed the grace of a butterfly so well Since you have a magic pen when it comes to writing haikus, can I request that you write one about sunflowers since I love them so! Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Joannak Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 121Indiana, USA |
Thank you all for reading and replying. I was outside writing another poem when a lovely swallowtail landed on my pen. I sat in amazement without moving until it fluttered away, just in time for me to quickly jot down this haiku. A good thing for me I was not thinking of a longer format... Dennis, Ellie, Maria ....I enjoyed your offerings as well. Thanks again, Joanna What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write? Ray Bradbury |
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