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SorrowsMystress Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 178I'm a wanderer, a nomad...I don't live in one particular area, Just wherever I end up. 
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There are times < !signature-->I want to break down and cry All hope gone All hope lost My mind a fanatical halacaust I reflect on my life on all my pain I see few good times So few of them left My perspective is negative I must keep it in Can't show anyone I hurt Can't show anyone I care Burned out and shoved down A dark, empty pit of emotion that I can no longer feel without bringing the knife to my throat I cry... Finally, I cry And the tears I've waited so long to shed Have all lost their meaning And now I'm alone So cold and alone And no one is around to hold me to comfort me to tell me Everything will be okay I start to think Nothing will ever be okay again Why do the tears flow so easily when all of the emotion is drained out of me I guess I'll never know And with this last sigh I sit and contemplate my final goodbyes And just as I'm about to break free Something grabs a hold of me I guess I'll live another day and see how things go from here... Besides, they can't get any worse... can they??? *I chose this poem because it shows the side of me that I know the best - my depressive side. Depression is all I've known for as long as I can remember. Fortunately, I have put things in perspective and have finally allowed myself happieness. And although I have my moments, at least now I can let the sun shine on me once more. "It was my love that did us both to death. " -Sylvia Plath [This message has been edited by SorrowsMystress (edited 09-10-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SorrowsMystress~ This write certainly epitomizes the lost and lonely feelings that consume some. 'I guess I'll live another day and see how things go from here... Besides, they can't get any worse... can they???' Someone, much wiser than myself said - 'Things at their worst - will either cease to be, or else climb upward to where they were before.' Look for the light to shine and you will find a ray of light to warm your spirit. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
...you have written of this so well, and I do not read pity, but a look at reality. Keep writing, good job. Love, Marcy  |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
Nothing moved me more than this poem SorrowsMistress. It is passionatley sad, yet boldly beautiful... --Little Girl |
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