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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Shades Of Twilight ~*Marge Tindal*~ When twilight comes to quietly kiss the meadow in bathing light of soft adorn There will be an awakening of two souls so sweetly reborn You will come to me in the wonder of a star to light the way Through the gates of remember where we'll await the coming of day Waltzing across the night holding hands within memories of our making Romantic thoughts on our minds a chance we will be taking One chance to write the memories to greet us with fresh morning eyes When twilight softly gives way to the shimmer of dawn on the rise Percolating twilight pleasures erupting in the glow of spreading sun finds us writing new memories as shades of twilight are never done ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very lovely, Marge! Soft and romantic!  Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ Thank you for enjoying it. I've got the weekend with these romantic little muses on the loose ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
oh goody goody, lucky us that your romantic muses are on the loose...can i anticipate more such romantic poems from you? hmmmm..to make memories together..such positivity and promise |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Marge; This poem is heavenly romantic, sigh, those muses are doing a wonderful job as they gently caress your pen with soft kisses and little hugs! Ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Marge, What beautiful, sensual images woven in this work. A delight to read and ponder! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kaile~ Oh, my ... they are fluttering around here for sure ! You know me - always a target for a romantic punch ! Thanks, my friend. Ellie~ Exactly ! They are splashing me with that romantic ink ! Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed it. Dennis~ Thank you. I'm always pleased to leave a ponder. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Oooee Marge, I do love to read beautiful poetry and this, my friend, IS beautiful poetry! ...romantic and lovely, indeed.(Shades of twilight, now one of my favorite lines) Love, Marcy Shades Of Twilight Through the gates of remember Waltzing across the night holding hands within memories of our making Romantic thoughts on our minds a chance we will be taking One chance to write the memories to greet us with fresh morning eyes When twilight softly gives way to the shimmer of dawn on the rise Percolating twilight pleasures erupting in the glow of spreading sun finds us writing new memories as shades of twilight are never done |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marcy~ You please so easily. Thank you so much for letting me know of your enjoyment. Is this the greatest place or what ??  Love ya', gal. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Flutter on little muse....what you create is so fine. Jon |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JonMewett~ Thank you so much for the sweet reply. Those little muses do have a way of fluttering. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh my, my, my Marge.....How beautifully romantic this is. I will be waiting in the meadow for the twilight to descend this evening, just to see what transpires. Bonnie |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
tres bien... your poem is so lovely it has me speaking French, and I don't even know French... wonderful poem Marge |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bonnie~ Oh, my ... that's just where I've been and I can tell you it is softly lit with moonlight. Thank you, my friend. Oui, Oui Mikie~ Vous êtes si plein de baloney!  Et je l'aime! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
marge- this is so beautiful...it feeds the hopeless romantic in me, as many of your poems do. love ya, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ Ahhhhh ! My sweet lady, we romantics are never hopeless ... I believe ! I believe ! I believe ! Thanks for the sweetness of your reply. I appreciate you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
i agree!! we romantics are not hopeless..we just need lots of time for dreaming... great little piece here marge..beautiful images... hugs, dg "i'm growin'/ i dont like it/ i'm growin' and it hurts/ i love you/ but i'm tired/ i guess i've got a lot to learn..." -w. watson |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DG~ Oh ... how right you are ! Dream time is the right time ... anytime ! Thanks for the read, hon. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
As a fellow hopeless romantic, I really felt a connection to your poem. It is so magical! I really enjoyed this one, Marge!...........beth "And I still believe you can never have too much fiction because reality is such a bore..." - REA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Beth~ I'm so glad that you fell hopelessly into this one. Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Just peeking into passions for a few moments to brighten my day with such little treasures as this little piece right here. Lovely and gentle.... One of my kitties was named Twilight. It's such a beautiful time of day. Nice to stop in and read a familar friends wonderful poetry whenever I want. I hope all is well with you Marge!!!!! Take Care, Bridgette |
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misguided angel Member
since 2001-11-23
Posts 106Australia |
Marge, I love the romance of poetry or the poetry of romance.....either way this fits nicely Andrea Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JustBleu~ Thank you for 'archive diving' ... If you only knew how appropriate this is to the joy in my heart this day~ (perhaps you did know ...)  I thank you soooooo much~ MisguidedAngel~ Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed my little heart-spill~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sometimes the words circle 'round finding a heart in wait ... remembering ... just how perfect the shades of twilight are~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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