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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
"voices" wild geese overhead primeval voices singing the sky has echoes beseeching the wind far above the prairie grass silent swift shadows [This message has been edited by coyote (edited 03-31-2001).] |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Very picturesque. I have to try this. Joyce |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Excellent. The image is perfect. Melton |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Thanks, Joyce & Melton.  "Try it you'll like it!!" lol "The only thing new in the world, is the history we don't know." |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Excellent! They're addictive, aren't they? To love another person is to see the face of God. |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Thanks, Marilyn. Yes they are! "The only thing new in the world, is the history we don't know." |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very good. I liked this one!  |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Thanks again, Dopey. Glad ya liked it. "The only thing new in the world, is the history we don't know." |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Excellent Haiku's Billy picturesque love them both keep on writing 'em Maree |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
Really like the second one, striking image! -wordancer |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Bill...these are magnificent..so beautifully did you bring this alive .... Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Thanks Maree, Your work inspires my nature themes. Wordancer, Glad you liked it and Thanks so much for the information. I haven't come up much for air yet. lol Ellie, Thanks so much.I hope you know you're the one that started this snowball rolling? lol "The only thing new in the world, is the history we don't know." |
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Red_Feather Member
since 2001-01-19
Posts 131The Vagabond Sea |
Silent swift shadows...This brought to me the memory of an enormous owl that lived near my home as a kid. One night as i stood watching the last of a sunset with my younger brother, this owl tried to snatch the hat from my head. I could not figure out what happened until i saw his silhouette just above the trees. Thanks for stirring the memory. One's not half two it's two are halves of one EE Cummings |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Thank you so much for reading. |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Thanks again, Red Feather. I love the geese, they are so intelligent. Your anecdote about the owl, reminds me of the time an acquaintance thought he would photograph some baby owls in their nest. The mother swooped down as he was leaning over the cliff to get the picture, and sunk her talons into his back!! Ouch!!! Thanks again for reading and contributing. "I hate quotes, they suck!" |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
These are both beautiful. I enjoyed them both but the one about geese is my favorite. We have lots of geese that fly over our part of the country and several years a pair has nested in the wetlands area at the back of our yard. I like to hear them even when they aren't honking or calling. They sort of mutter when they're contented. Betty Lou Hebert |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Thanks, Betty Lou. We live very close to the river here, and take walks along its banks. In the early morning you can always hear geese. And of course coyotes. lol "I hate quotes, they suck!" |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
Singing? Maybe so. Nice "little ones" coyote. I like this format too. [This message has been edited by wandering glider (edited 04-05-2001).] |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Thanks, Glider. For taking the time to read. And welcome to the Pub. "I hate quotes, they suck!" |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
I liked these alot, I especialy enjoyed the level of abstraction in them. Keith every day is a new day with which we can change the world |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Thanks, Keith. I like your style too. "I hate quotes, they suck!" |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A hawnking implore mate of life, forevermore on wing of love's lift |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
I never thought of it that way, Karilea. Although they beseech the wind, the true source of power for this recurring journey, is their eternal love for one another. Very enlightening, Thanks! "I hate quotes, they suck!" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
liked this |
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