The Corner Pub |
A Chance To Love |
Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
He sipped the smooth and warm red wine Just by the neon of the… exit sign A lonely heart in search of love He had never kissed the dove He shuffled ‘round the old bar stool And wondered if he played the fool Someone would come and pity him See his plight and take him in The Smokey room was almost bare Then suddenly a vision there Caught his eye and he was smote He drew his light put down his coat The woman was paradise sitting there She ran slim fingers through her hair And as she sat he questioned why Misty tears seeped from her eye Her face was chiselled by De’vinchi’s hand Her back the colour of pure soft sand Her form was sculptured perfect stone Why was it that she sat alone? She caught him glancing from afar Lent more heavy on the bar Drank her second shot of gin Whispered ‘Hi’ and let him in He slipped down from his lonely stool Walked up to her.. played it cool ‘Can I get another drink Have a chat what do you think’ Her agreeing nod a welcome sight Perhaps his luck had changed tonight He slipped in closer touched her skin A shudder shook the soul of him She was so sensual her scent was strong He couldn’t work out just what was wrong They raised their glasses’ to you and cheers Tell me why you shed your tears’ Her sobbing stopped a little while She drew a breath and raised a smile ‘I was happy when the evening started Now I’m sitting here just broken hearted My man has found another one When I got home his things had gone He just meant the world to me I loved him so but didn’t see The feelings there were all one-way And now I’m crying here today’ ------------------------------------ If only he could find the phrase He’d keep her happy all her day’s But’ I’m sorry’ is all he could find to say And his chance right there just slipped away They sat there in the smoke filled bar But their conversation didn’t go to far Exchanging thoughts and the odd small joke When he walked home his heart felt broke She disappeared in to the thankless night The whiskey had made his head feel light With every step he felt alone The pavements glistened with cold wet stone He turned the key the and swung the door Returning on his own once more He glanced again at the streets so dead A willing lover………..a lone cold bed Jon Mewett [This message has been edited by Jon Mewett (edited 09-08-2000).] |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Jon; Wow! I was mesmerized from beginning to the end. What a romantically sad story, but you sure wrote with a magical pen here, it flows like a dream! Wonderful! Ellie P.S. thank you, Jon, for your replies to my poems, I look forward to what you have to say. Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
A epic tale of a lost love night. Your words painted every sight. Great writing enjoyed to read. A work of art and wondrous piece. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
Wow...a love story in a poem. This is really original work, Jon. --Little Girl |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Jon, Simply wonderful. Beautiful. I am left speechless and in tears. The pain of being alone is something all of us have to surpass at one point or another. Love heals everything. Alicia A. Renzelman "a lonely heart in search of love he had never kissed the dove..." |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Captivating read, Jon! A sad and lonely tale. Denise |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Thanx everbody....yeah lonliness can be quite a test....but sometimes when others seem to have everything ...close up they have nothing...lonliness can happen to all don't you think? Thanx for your reading......... all Jon |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Jon, The heart is a lonely hunter, How masterfully you have crafted this narrative, sad but honest. Great read! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Oh my my Jon, MY FAVORITE OF YOURS! This is awesome....words escape me. You've written a beautiful script of real life. Oh, so beautiful and visual and , and, and..!! |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Thanx Dennis and Alle..your replies are very warm and appreciated...thank you. Jon |
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