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pegasus111
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0 posted 2000-09-04 04:06 AM


in matters of love
a fool and his fantasy
are soon parted


the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

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kaile
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1 posted 2000-09-04 05:20 AM


very nice...such profound words within these few words.....
pegasus111
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2 posted 2000-09-04 12:52 PM


Kaile...thank you for the read  

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

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3 posted 2000-09-04 05:58 PM


Ah I learned my lesson last time I had a fantasy nice haiku

What I write and others read is your own experiance and perceptions.

pegasus111
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4 posted 2000-09-04 08:24 PM


Maria, A lesson forgotten is a lesson repeated.. Thank you for the read

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Joannak
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5 posted 2000-09-04 08:31 PM


Ah, Pegasus, such a wise haiku.  I like this one very much.

Joanna


What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write? Ray Bradbury



Yu Lan
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6 posted 2000-09-05 12:09 PM


Hehehe, aah yes.. of course.. ^_^ Lovely, Pegasus.. ^_^

Luv,
Lynne

pegasus111
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7 posted 2000-09-05 07:26 AM


Joanna, Lynne, thanks..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Dennis L. White
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8 posted 2000-09-05 10:39 AM


Pegasus,
  Bullseye! You nailed that one on the head!
But I have to ask, Is that your final answer?
LOL
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)


pegasus111
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9 posted 2000-09-05 12:07 PM


only a fool would answer that question Dennis..lol

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

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