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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand 
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written last year.. again, i have no idea where these thoughts came from, lol.. no-one's said anything of sorts to me.. well, maybe I have.. hehe I Have Become They tell me I have changed, Tell me I am someone else, Someone they don’t know. I told them I’m the same, I’ll always be myself, But then the tears would come. And in the mirror, I look into my eyes. See a cold steel door, Hiding someone else. Someone I’ve become; And do not want to be. -Lynne |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
reminds me of a piece I wrote called The Stranger in the Glass..this was very well done, Lynne the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
gosh,this is quite a powerful piece of work...the lack of courage to confront yourself for the person you have become, the pain of self-denial....loved this one lots  pegasus111,will love to read ur Stranger in the Glass |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
I think that sometimes, I'd always ask people if i'd changed, they say no of course. But I always feel different. I like the way you convey it What I write and others read is your own experiance and perceptions. |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Thanx.. ^_^ mm, I haven't read your "The Stranger in the Glass", pegasus.. have u posted it?? I wanna see! ^_^ thanx u guys.. ^^ Love, Lynne |
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