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Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

0 posted 2000-08-12 08:48 PM

Haven't really decided on a name for this one, as I just wrote it last night.. *_^ maybe..

Noisic

Radio moans softly,
Its delecate tastes in music,
Not including the abomination
It's being forced to play.

Apologising profusely,
For noisic manufactured,
Courteous radio attempts to drown torure,
In crackles and wails.

Smiling my thanks to the radio,
I politely change stations,
And return the wink,
When crackles and wails cease.

Hehe, my mum was playing really baaad music yesterday, and I just thought of this, hehe.. ^^

-Lynne

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-08-13 05:46 AM

I think Noisic is the perfect title! I knew what this would be about just by the title! Sometimes, to me anyway, the difference between 'noisic' and 'music' is my current state of mind...hehehe...I can enjoy something sometimes and other times the same thing gets on my nerves!

Denise

Dennis L. White
Senior Member

since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

2 posted 2000-08-13 10:13 AM

Lynne,

Noisic in my head
No channel selector knob
Driving me insane

I can relate to this, LOL, Nice poem!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

3 posted 2000-08-14 02:37 AM

Thank you denise and Dennis!! ^_^
Hehe.. thank u Denise, ok, I will keep that title then. ^_^
Thanx 4 the poetic reply, Dennis!! ^^

Love,
Lynne

pegasus111
Member Elite

since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

4 posted 2000-08-15 08:00 AM

I wish I could tune out those awful boom rap and hiphop blasts coming from passing cars with all the windows open as easily as you changed the station..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

5 posted 2000-08-23 05:41 AM

Hehe, yeah aren't they awful?! If they chose decent music, it wouldn't be as bad that they had it at such loud volumes.. ^^ hehe, thanx pegasus..

Love,
Lynne

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

6 posted 2000-08-23 05:48 AM

Lynne; The title is perfect, because it describes some of that stuff perfectly...good one here! Ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

jamesjiao
Member

since 2000-04-12

Posts 268
Backwaters of Avalon

7 posted 2000-09-03 07:20 PM

Firstly, just a note that you spelt 'delicate' and 'torture' incorrectly, and secondly I do agree that your mum plays bad music especially in loud volume, or is it because your taste for music is too narrow, Lynne

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Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

8 posted 2000-09-04 02:01 AM

hehe, thanx James.. yeah the torure was a typo.. but I think the other was a purposeful spelling.. *_^ well, i can't change it here, now.. but thank you. ^^
mm, hehe.. well.. I don't know if I have a narrow tastes in music.. I don't like Boney M tho!! ^^

-Lynne

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

9 posted 2000-09-04 05:47 AM

short simple piece that reveals lots...thank you

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

10 posted 2000-09-05 12:22 PM

thanx kaile

-Lynne

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