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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Winter Still-Life One clear drop gathers barren, a crystal in time, desiccate. Its fear realized, parched and morbid, aware. Releasing, falling, harsh inviting. Piercing the others, pooling in bitter cold. --...chanson~ "Music, when soft voices die, Vibrates in the memory..." P.B. Shelley |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
a sobering piece...we so often associate winter with unpleasant things..I get that feeling here..well done, chancondegest. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
One clear drop. . . hanging in the balance. . . Speaks not only of the winter of seasons, but the winters of our lives. . . Excellent chanson. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
pegasus111.....Very true, we tend to think of winter as a dismal time (although I personally love the season. I'm a snowball fight/snow fort maker person. *grin*) Sven....Yes, our lives can sometimes feel the cold. Thanks to both of you for your comments. --...chanson~ "Music, when soft voices die, Vibrates in the memory..." P.B. Shelley |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
short intense gem...a read much enjoyed |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
kaile....thanks! Please you enjoyed --...chanson~ "Music, when soft voices die, Vibrates in the memory..." P.B. Shelley |
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