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Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
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0 posted 2000-08-28 12:05 PM


Cool misty morning
Dodging yellow school busses
Summer passes torch


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pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
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ocala, fl, usa
1 posted 2000-08-28 12:44 PM


ok..summer is almost over..fall is on the way..do you have to rub it in?..lol

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Joannak
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Indiana, USA
2 posted 2000-08-28 01:24 PM


I like, Dennis.  I, for one, am happiest when the summer is over and fall returns to the air...

Joanna

What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write? Ray Bradbury



Chanson
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Up Creek w/Out Paddle
3 posted 2000-08-28 02:17 PM


Cool misty morning Yes!...my favorite season will be here soon.
Enjoyed, Dennis  ....chanson~

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
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King of Prussia, PA USA
4 posted 2000-08-28 06:08 PM


Dennis; This is so lovely and timely. I hate it all, because summer is my favorite and I hate to see it end. you're stil the King!!!
                                 Love, Sis

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

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5 posted 2000-08-28 06:20 PM


i'll miss the summer

Blue skys open dawn
crimison, orange, brown will fall
A mist that covers all


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singapore
6 posted 2000-09-04 05:03 AM


very nice way to put it...the last line reminds me of spring, summer, autumn and winter as 4 sprinters running around the track, passing the baton to one another

thank for this image

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