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Moon Dust
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0 posted 2000-08-31 06:36 PM


As lovers young dream
Should end in sweet happiness
Soon petals will fall


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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-09-01 04:00 AM


Maria~

Petals from the heart
Fragrance sweetly cascading
Lay at lover's feet


~*Marge*~

*Very nicely done Senryu


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Poet deVine
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2 posted 2000-09-01 12:39 PM


Lovely..and it seems to fit into the the 'end of summer' feel around here!  
Moon Dust
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3 posted 2000-09-02 06:44 PM


Lovely reponse marge
Thanks poet deVine

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allan
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4 posted 2000-09-02 08:29 PM


Hmmm sad but true... poignant this... 'liked it v. much...  
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