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Sudhir Iyer
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0 posted 2000-08-30 01:36 PM


The great Unicorn -
Horse with one horn
comes flying out
of the ten O clock sun;
Wings wide spread
and sweating,
breathing fire -
a smoking dragon!

The Marlboro Man?
The Pied Piper?

No, an Indian summer!
~

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DawnG
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1 posted 2000-08-30 03:04 PM


LOL, this is cute.

                               Dawn

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2 posted 2000-08-30 05:34 PM


Lovely poem There's too many peoms on here about summer i'll miss it

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JOY 14
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3 posted 2000-08-30 05:34 PM


And I just thought you were describing a magical unicorn! An indian summer. I can see it, I can!  

Joy

Sudhir Iyer
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4 posted 2000-08-31 06:27 AM


Callie, thanks for thinking so...

Maria, I know what you mean... thank you

Joy, thats a great compliment... thanks...

regards to all,
sudhir

Elizabeth Santos
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5 posted 2000-08-31 07:24 AM


You describe it perfectly. Just when you get out those cozy duds to go out in the brisk autumn air, it hits you like a unicorn flying out of the sun.
You are amazing
Liz

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6 posted 2000-08-31 08:11 AM


Sudhir I can feel the autumn chill leaving, even though it's hot here already today.  I hope this isn't our "Indian summer."  Love this little beauty.  Bonnie  
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7 posted 2000-08-31 10:54 AM


Sudhir,  good imagery! Good write, enjoyed.
Sudhir Iyer
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8 posted 2000-08-31 01:05 PM


Liz,  A-maze-ing is perfect   Thanks
"cryptic crosswords have no success stories" - Me thinks at one of those cryptic moments...  

Bonnie, thank you, thank you...  

Marcy, thanks a huge bunch...  

regards to all,
sudhir


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9 posted 2000-09-01 03:52 AM


Sudhir~

Indian Summer
Blooming with colors anew
Palette perfection


~*Marge*~


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Sudhir Iyer
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10 posted 2000-09-02 09:21 AM


What a beautiful response...

incredible.... so many thanks to you O friend of mine, Marge,

regards,
sudhir

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