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Brenda Hall
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since 2000-05-30
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0 posted 2000-08-31 05:00 PM


We gather to 'Celebrate' a cause
As we take a moment to pause
For a Blessing our Father has sent
And brought us to this 'Special Event'

We hold our breath as we quietly listen
To a little heartbeat,which has risen!
It's really breathing,and oh,so pure
A kick or two tells us it is sure!

Open the Presents,yellow,pink and blue
Bring out the Cake and bubbly Brew!
A little heartburn along the way
It's just a small price to pay

Let's 'Celebrate' in elegant style
Pass the Presents along, in single file
Enjoy the Hoop-la and the Happy Hypes!
Because next,comes Diapers and Wipes!

Brenda H.

© Copyright 2000 Brenda Hall - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2000-08-31 06:43 PM


Congradulations     

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Poet deVine
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2 posted 2000-09-01 12:40 PM


How sweet! Hearing that heartbeat for the first time is something so magical! Congratulations! Can't wait to read poems about morning sickness (LOL).
Brenda Hall
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3 posted 2000-09-01 01:13 PM


Hi!

I just want to clarify something about my poem! I wrote this poem about a Baby Shower for my Daughters' friend.

My own Morning Sickness lasted all day for nine months.

Thanks for the input!

Brenda Hall


[This message has been edited by Brenda Hall (edited 09-01-2000).]

Honey Bunch
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4 posted 2000-09-01 01:21 PM


This was good to read!  Just as well we all forget the "bad times" once the baby arrives.  We expect two new babies in my family in October and that makes ME feel very old.
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