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Foggy Tendrils Haiku

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

0 posted 2000-08-29 08:31 AM

Foggy tendrils stretch
Across summer ripened fields
Seeking harvest song

blackhalo
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since 2000-02-15

Posts 467
Denver, CO

1 posted 2000-08-29 01:43 PM

Very nice, Dennis
Alicia

Pepper
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since 1999-08-19

Posts 3079
Southern Florida

2 posted 2000-08-29 03:02 PM

Have missed your writing, my friend ... 'S'
I enjoyed this much .....
(Hugs)

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

3 posted 2000-08-29 03:20 PM

Simply beautiful!

...chanson~

~"Music, when soft voices die,
Vibrates in the memory..." P.B. Shelley~

allan
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since 2000-04-09

Posts 620
On the road

4 posted 2000-08-29 03:21 PM

Lovely image.

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

5 posted 2000-08-29 06:13 PM

Dennis; This masterpiece is the diamond in the King of Haiku's crown! Love, Sis P.U.Y.M.B.

Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere

6 posted 2000-08-30 07:32 AM

Simply put, beautiful..

With a little piece of tomorrow,
You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye.
Because today won't last forever,
And the past will only make you cry.

BSC

Moderator

Member Elite

since 2000-02-04

Posts 2919
New York, USA

7 posted 2000-08-31 08:23 AM

I do believe I saw this scene the other morning Dennis....What a vivid picture you have penned with so few words! Just beautiful oh kingly one. Bonnie

Moon Dust

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since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

8 posted 2000-08-31 06:48 PM

beauiful, your good at these Haikus

"Those who will not learn to use this instrument well cannot be saved by an expanded alphabet; they will only afflict us with expanded gibberish"
~

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2000-09-01 04:20 AM

Dennis~
You captured the fingertips of fog PERFECTLY !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

10 posted 2000-09-01 12:53 PM

Dennis, as always, always impressive

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