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Sunrise Haiku - For Marge |
allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
sun honey spreads gold kissing the sky with warming another day dawns [This message has been edited by allan (edited 08-30-2000).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marge will love this! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
allan- yes...marge will most definitely love this, as do i. this is really beautiful. thanks for sharing it. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 08-29-2000).] |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
All these haiku sunshine poems almost make me forget the unbearable heat that's been around lately *lol* and cause me to want to stretch out in the sun like my cats do.. With a little piece of tomorrow, You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye. Because today won't last forever, And the past will only make you cry. |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Alan, A beautiful word picture for Marge, and for the rest of us also! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Ooooo allan!! Pretty pretty!! *grinZ* can never figure out how come ur creative juices never run out eh? *S* Divine! love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Yum allan! I want to dive into that sunrise and eat it! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Lovely "Those who will not learn to use this instrument well cannot be saved by an expanded alphabet; they will only afflict us with expanded gibberish" ~ |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
allan, wonderful tribute to a very nice lady and with your haiku, I agree. marcy |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
allan.....I'm definately feeling the golden honey warmth. ...chanson~ "Music, when soft voices die, Vibrates in the memory..." P.B. Shelley |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Allan~ Honey-sky rests warm On this rising of delight Thermometer soars *Delightful and I thank you most sincerely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
An excellent haiku! Great imagery, I can picture it! Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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