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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. 
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I consider myself not a Poet, The longer you read, you will know it, But the words from my soul, Oft' escape with a flow, My writing will sometimes 'ere show it. But Poetrys not such a curse, We all could imagine much worse, Than to devote some free time, To some words linked in rhyme, Delighting our friends with some verse. Please accept my humble entreaty, My skills are both lacking and needy, I'll try not to bore 'em On your wonderful Forum, As I post here my mental Grafitti! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I'm glad that you share what you write Delightful's your verse, Dennis White The words let them flow from your soul Let sharing with us be your goal.  Denise |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I dunno Dennis...this sure reads like a "poet wrote it" to me... This is VERY good!! not lacking, not needy... well written and expressed!!! give us more!!! take care, janet marie ...every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. every poem and song... every rhyme and verse... your still here...like a beautiful curse. your my inspiration, your my fire... your words fill me with poetic desire. Every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
I knew it, I know it, You are a poet- I can see through your lies Your disguise and alibis- That you are a poet, And know it. Don't play it, just said it We know it So you have just begun But how fine you have done (so admit to yourself-) "I'm a Poet!" |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
With all these replies, I have to agree! You're a poet at heart even if you can't see Your talent is shining, your gift is in rhyming, And a whole LOT better than me! I, too, here post my own humble words, And they get more applause than they really deserve, For I don't have the talent (but try to sound gallant) And try at poetic reserve. I write of dragons (I wish I was one), To say what they might do, it's really quite fun! But I still can't arrange, it sounds very strange When I try to rhyme one by one!  Now do you finally see How much better you are than me? If I could write, just for a night Like you...dear Lord, hear my plea! You are a POET, Dennis! lol See? This reply doesn't even have a good meter! Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Sure looks like you're a poet to me  Enjoyed it a lot. When will we see more ? |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
dennis,just want to say that life in the corner pub will never be as enriching without you and your funny and thoughtful haikus  |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
give over, your one of our best What I write and others read is your own experiance and perceptions. |
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Honey Bunch Member
since 2000-08-08
Posts 99South Africa |
With everyone writing in rhyme it seems I must put in my time. say “hi to Dennis, hope you are fine” and settle myself for the night. Added to that in graces good light my hand now waves in delight for looking to heaven I see in my mind your words as clouds in the sky. Soft and fluffy, full of good hope, lifting and cheering my soul, mixing with blue and floating in love – do you really think I’m on dope? Don’t stop me now for I’m on a roll, sliding deep down in a hole, but sounding like an underground mole, I think it’s time I went home!! Helen |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
Dennis, you will no longer be a poet when your heart stops speaking to you. Mine often does when I'm writing and typing poetry (here and in other places). --Little One |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Kaile, Thanks for dusting this one off and bringing it out of the archives, It is one of my early works when I was still in denial LOL Maria, I am only one of many gifted poets that post here, no more, no less LOL Thanks for your kind words. Helen, Thank you for your delightful poetic response. TOO COOL! Little One, Thanks for your reply, I can tell you have a good heart, it will speak if you but listen! |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Ahhhhh, the Limerick....the sign of a poet for sure!  Very nice, Dennis. --...chanson~ "Music, when soft voices die, Vibrates in the memory..." P.B. Shelley |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Chanson, Thank you for your kind reply, as far as limericks go, mine need a lot of work, LOL |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
I once knew a man name of Dennis In the forums he was such a menace With your senryu and haiku There's no one quite like you Perhaps I can beat you at tennis Jon |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Jon, I am honored, imortalized in verse, limerick no less, About that tennis, my court or yours, LOL Dennis :^) |
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