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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Heavenly Icicles Slipping shimmery moonbeams shadow behind the frosted ivy of your eyes, eclipsing magnitudes of eternal love. Glowing roads of emotional distance brandish paved slip knots of reality, freedoms smile a lunar balance away. Journey of flowing constellations breath festering silent whispers toward the sky, illuminating romantic endeavors. Solar rewards picnic of desire cleverly dining upon simple cheer, pleasantly received through tender caresses. Heavenly icicles melting to earth delicately radiated through charms softly delivered within elated minds. |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
what a lovely romantic poem..great images.. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautifully written, Gloria! Denise |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Gloria, This is a beautiful poem. Dawn |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
Such beautiful imagry and grace. This poem puts a smile upon my face. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
This is so good Lost. It is a rather romantic poem, and VERY descriptive. Love as it is can be a cofusing emotion, as heartaches and longing are often confused. --Little Girl |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
LD: This IS poem, (as someone before me said); enjoyed this very much as you carried the theme throughout. Very nice. Love, marcy |
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