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blackhalo
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since 2000-02-15
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0 posted 2000-08-30 12:37 PM


Lord, I simply pray tonight
That You could help me win this fight
You see, often is exactly what it's not
For me to win in battles I've fought

But this one, Lord, means so much more
I'm fighting for something I truly adore
If You could help me win just this one
I'd declare, this battle, by You, was won

Lord, I promise, I wouldn't ask for more
This one thing could open so many doors
And, oh, how my heart would soar like a dove
If I could just win, this battle called love



Eventually, all dreams come tru. If you wait long enough!
Alicia A. Renzelman


© Copyright 2000 Alicia R - All Rights Reserved
sweetcollege_girl
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1 posted 2000-08-30 01:30 PM


Wow...great poem Alicia...truly a great prayer. Keep up the good work!

~*~SCG~*~

"For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart some

blackhalo
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since 2000-02-15
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Denver, CO
2 posted 2000-08-30 01:38 PM


Thanks, SCG, I appreciate the sentiment!
alicia

DawnG
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3 posted 2000-08-30 03:03 PM


Oh Alicia,

May I pray along with you? Great poem.

                                   Dawn

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