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Images Abound - part 2... haiku poetry #4 to #6
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Images Abound - part 2... haiku poetry #4 to #6 |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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IV Breakfast Blues White petals uncurl Spring lily greets morning sun ~ Honeybee seats self V Earthquake Chills Stilled birds stop chirping Moments before the earthquake ~ Quiet precedes storm VI Indian Monsoon River flows from hill Water falls as white as milk ~ Peacocks in rains dance ~ enjoyable? |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Juls [This message has been edited by juliet_2u (edited 08-24-2000).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Oh Thank you Juliet... for your lovely words... regards, sudhir |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Honeybee seats self Yes, very enjoyable...each one of them are vivid images!  ...chanson~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank You chanson regards, sudhir |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
These are great! I can't wait to read your next wonderful haikus [This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 08-25-2000).] |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
yes..will they "bee" 8-10? Or a "storm" of 8-15?! Or merely a "dance" of 8-9? Very nice haikus, Sudhir! stay cool  ~~Lavada~~  [This message has been edited by sweetcollege_girl (edited 08-25-2000).] |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
These are amazing, Sudhir! Very well done! Denise |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Your talent shows strongly in these beautiful poetic pictures of varied essence.. Very enjoyable! David |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
My friend, My friend~ These are exquisite ! Pictures in my mind ~ Lovely, lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank You all my dear friends for your lovely and kind words in response... regards, sudhir |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
A treat to the reader, Sudhir .... I'll be looking for more of your works .... 'S' Hugs |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
 Very enjoyable.. With a little piece of tomorrow, You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye. Because today won't last forever, And the past will only make you cry. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Ah! So glad to see you, Pepper... hope you are doing well... Thanks for coming by... and broken_winged_angel... thank you very much... regards, sudhir |
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