for my friend in Utah... - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

The Corner Pub

for my friend in Utah...

Tramp Poet
Senior Member

since 2000-01-06

Posts 754
Could Be Anywhere...

0 posted 2000-08-29 06:47 AM

a Puzzle

When I was hurting
you took, entwined my arm
and I knew that you care.
Sitting gently, feeling
comfort in the touching
knowing that you were there.

My friend, my confidante
I love the sharp sparkle
dancing in your piercing eyes.
Eyes someone could fall into
blissfully drown, forever
with contented, little sighs.

Shall we imagine, my friend
fantasize about secret maybes
loose the dreaming once awhile?
Is there hope in tomorrow’s,
kisses made of moonlit wine,
awakening a sleeping smile?

Or shall we be salubrious
ignore, pass by and deny
an extra-ordinary possibility?
Perhaps, not explore combinations
all the ways, means and places
of fitting together three?

bleeding...

"Tis ink coming
from his arm,
Captain!"

allan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 620
On the road

1 posted 2000-08-29 03:09 PM

Wonderful to have a good friend that cares and eases the pain, but easy to drift to dangerous lands... (Three doesn't work out to well usually! - this aspect reminded me of an old Jefferson Airplane song - can't remember the title but the lyrics were along the lines of "Why can't we go on being three?")

Best left, TOO complicated (if I get your meaning correctly!). But very well put together poem, gets to the heart...

Tramp Poet
Senior Member

since 2000-01-06

Posts 754
Could Be Anywhere...

2 posted 2000-08-30 03:42 AM

thanks allan
same advice i gave my polygamist
friend in Utah...
but he is determined to experience
pms x2...

bleeding...

"Tis ink coming
from his arm,
Captain!"

Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere

3 posted 2000-08-30 06:53 AM

*thoughtfully* No..threes don't normally work out to well..

I do like this poem though..It's very well written.

With a little piece of tomorrow,
You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye.
Because today won't last forever,
And the past will only make you cry.

allan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 620
On the road

4 posted 2000-08-30 04:54 PM

pms x 2 - what a thought! (will i get any sleep tonight with that thought haunting my every dream???!)

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.