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blackhalo
Member

since 2000-02-15

Posts 467
Denver, CO

0 posted 2000-08-28 12:37 PM

I'm sorry
For losing you
But I am not sorry
For the lesson it taught

I'm sorry
For not letting go
But I am not sorry
For the smiles

I'm sorry
For the phone calls
But I am not sorry
For the friendship

I'm sorry
For not understanding
But I am not sorry
For asking

I'm sorry
For the pain I've caused
But I am not sorry
For loving you

I am VERY SORRY that all of my poems have been so repetetive lately. I just seem to pick up a pen, and that is what comes out from my hand. I'll try to post something very soon that isn't quite so blahdey-blah!
Alicia A. Renzelman

pegasus111
Member Elite

since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

1 posted 2000-08-28 12:46 PM

Alicia..write what you feel..I'm there now too in real life..deja vou for me..< !signature-->

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

[This message has been edited by pegasus111 (edited 08-28-2000).]

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

2 posted 2000-08-28 06:28 PM

Ah i'm the same, diferent words, but the same meaning. It dosen't matter

Sad poem, I liked it.

"Those who will not learn to use this instrument well cannot be saved by an expanded alphabet; they will only afflict us with expanded gibberish"
~

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

3 posted 2000-08-29 01:56 AM

^_^ Nice ta say sorry.. one thing I used to not be able to do.. Regret's not a nice feeling, mm? I like the way you've written this..

And nah, not a problem that your poetry is along the same lines.. mine usually is.. I've been trying to use different topics/subjects.. but they never seem to mean anything.. ^^
Write on! ^_^

Love,
Lynne

Jon Mewett
Senior Member

since 2000-03-04

Posts 1304

4 posted 2000-08-30 05:26 AM

And i'm sorry you havn't written more ........keep um coming Alicia.

Jon

Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere

5 posted 2000-08-30 06:57 AM

A lot of my poems are repetive, too, I think...So no worries.. This is very beautiful...*nods* It is hard to say I'm sorry sometimes... I'm looking forward to reading more of your work...*skips off to send this as a card*

With a little piece of tomorrow,
You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye.
Because today won't last forever,
And the past will only make you cry.

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