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Maya the Brokenhearted Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 66 |
is it wrong to love someone when your love brings pain? how can you justify clinging and smothering the one whom you profess to love eternally, faithfully, uncondtionally? is it a sin to break a heart because you cannot walk away? tell me when does loving someone become wrong? Shall we live to breathe again? Or simply just exsist in this limbo we dare to call life! ~Maya 2/20/00 |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Loving another is never wrong The time to let go becomes clear when The sorrows outweigh the joys. [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 02-20-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Maya...heartfelt poem...and you ask the rel questions...I never know either...let me know if you find the answer...I know it will make for an excellent poem(smile) take care, janet marie Now for me some words come easy... But I know that they don't mean that much Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch. You never knew what I loved in you-- I don't know what you loved in me... Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be... How long have I been sleeping- How long have I been drifting alone through the night... How long have I've dreaming I could make it right... If I closed my eyes and tried with all my might To be the one you need... Jackson Browne |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Loving someone becomes wrong if you Don't show them the love that should be true; But if you're in pain, the other should be There to comfort, and help in need. So loving someone should never be wrong If you and your counterpart remain strong. The "plus" side of love is as sweet as a mango, But keep in mind it takes two to tango! That's a very good question, Maya, put into beautiful verse. You do such a great job!  Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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Shelley Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 263Ohio, USA |
The heart doesn't lie, we just twist it sometimes to justify the changes we are afraid to face. |
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Another Heather Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 93Canada |
very good question maya. something i`ve never been able to figure out the answer to. in my experience though, i don`t think it can ever be wrong. broken hearts are just one of the downsides but when just the opposite happens, it was worth the risk in the end. "The world is never the same once a good poem has been added to it." -Dylan Thomas |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Heartfelt, touching poem, Maya! Denise |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I ditto Nan on this one Maya. Enjoyed the read  |
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JSage Member
since 2000-08-25
Posts 91Nashua, NH USA |
Maya this really hit me. I know exactly what you mean. I can feel what you feel/felt. Somedays love can be so painful and it leaves you wondering was it ever worth it. Pain and all... I think it is. Beautifully written. I look forward to reading more of your work... which I'm probably gonna go do now. -Jes |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
mm.. a poem indeed.. what do I say?? I don't think loving someone can ever be wrong.. just depends how u deal with it... that's all.. can be 'stupid'.. but never wrong... nice.. -Lynne |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
 I think I disagree with a bunch of you in here...It's my opinion that loving someone can be wrong if it's hurting either one of you.. *sighs* Very touching words and I look forward to seeing more by you.With a little piece of tomorrow, You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye. Because today won't last forever, And the past will only make you cry. |
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