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Rain haiku

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

0 posted 2000-09-19 05:52 PM

Falls down aimlessly,
And re-painting neon signs,
Washing away pain.

There are enough colours in the world,
To paint your own dreams,
You won't get them,
Till you try.

Jon Mewett
Senior Member

since 2000-03-04

Posts 1304

1 posted 2000-09-20 04:33 AM

Desolation nicely painted........good one maria.

Jon

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

2 posted 2001-05-07 12:42 PM

a good one....

~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

3 posted 2001-05-07 02:08 PM

this is a great depiction of rain. beautiful in it's simplicity, a great read. thanks.

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

4 posted 2001-05-07 07:54 PM

Thanks for reading

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-05-13 05:05 PM

Nicely done!

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