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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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we speak but do not talk we hear but do not listen we look but do not see we touch but do not feel we love but do not...LOVE a family of strangers... -vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
So true. Very well written! Denise |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
VL, How strange this common circumstance of close alienation-even more distressing than feeling all alone in a sea of strangers! You've atddressed the matter well. David |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
So wisely written, very well done. |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Yes, this an oft too frequent sadness. It shouldn't happen but when people think too much and touch too little... I loved the honest humanity of this...  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ And much too frequently it happens that way. Nice write. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Wonderful message written so well. Marcy |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Vlraynes, Unfortunately, how true this is.  Dawn |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Hi everybody... Thanks so much for all the kind responses. You are all very special to me, and your comments and words of encouragement really mean a lot. Glad you all liked this. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Thank goodness I try and live my life to the opposite of this! Thanks for giving me a little reminder, tricks!  Short and sweet, great job!!  Little Spyro T. Dragon Watching the poets Passions' guardian dragon Moves with the rhymes' flow. Though my body be Human, my heart and soul be That of a dragon. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
spyro- too bad more people don't live their lives the opposite of this...so glad you do. thanks so much for the kind words...your responses mean a lot to me. -tricks "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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Honey Bunch Member
since 2000-08-08
Posts 99South Africa |
So very true, Vicky. Well said. Helen |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Honey Bunch- Thanks so much for reading and responding. Glad you enjoyed this. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
true..very true... this is how we tend to live our lives in a rush rush world..'tis sad..i try to make more of life than this... very nice dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- oh yes...'tis very sad...too much time spent on material things, and not enough time spent on each other. i'm sure you make much more of life than this...that's why you are you. love ya, -tricks  "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
short and simple yet packs punches lots...thanx for the read |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
kaile- thanks so much. your kind words mean alot to me. glad you enjoyed. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ Just smiling at how much you've grown in your writing ... One year later ... you're still WOWing us~  ~*Me*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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