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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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OK, time to be brave and just throw one out there. Be gentle.  )faded hearts faded hearts as faded jeans ripped and torn apart scars of the past remain in view a testament of days gone by faint colors linger where they once shone bright dulled by the passing of time but beyond the scars and colors dim lives a spirit which cannot be broken for faded hearts as faded jeans may be mended with patience and time vlraynes |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
welcome to passions!!!Viraynes, dont be afraid to "throw one out there"...we are all friendly here and i promise we wont bite...LOL  i must say this is an excellent first post...i like your simple yet effective metaphor of hearts and love as faded jeans and the hopeful promise hinted at the end of the poem |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Welcome, vlraynes!!! *huGz* This is juz great!!! Keep 'throwing'!!! I'll 'catch' them!!!! *S* love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
hey tricks!! its about time you came to visit..and so glad you brought something with you  ok..so you know i like this right... throw some more! dg "i speak in written word--my lips, no sound may utter..." dgvarner |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
I always feel like patience is a virtue time more powerful than the stongest steel. Great imagery. Though if I tried to patch my faded jeans I'd wind up making a new set. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, vlraynes! Lovely poem! Please check your email for a special welcome! Denise |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! This is sad and gentle and hopeful! Nice entry poem, I look forward to reading more from you.  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VLRaynes~ Welcome to the caring hearts of Passions. A delightful first read - hope to see more. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Hi everybody. Thanks for all the kind responses. I feel right at home already. vlraynes |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
vlraynes, Welcome to Passions, nice job on this poem, I like it much |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Time and patience go hand in hand when anything is on the mend. Enjoyed this a lot. |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
Welcome to Passions nice first post |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Thanks to all of you for all your kind words. It's so nice to have so many new friends here at the pub. -vlraynes (vicky) "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 07-30-2000).] |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
This was worth pulling up. Those old faded patched jeans are the most comfortable, too, aren't they? They might not look so exciting, but they're the favorites anyway. And those faded hearts often are the ones that have the most to give, too. Nice analogy!To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So here is where it all started...I love going treasure hunting... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wonderful post. I really liked this one and the analogy you used. Wonderful!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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nicolette Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 42St. Paul, Minnesota |
Great poem. I look forward to having more "thrown out there." Nic |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
this is a great read..welcome to the pub. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Hi Vicky! Guess wad? I'm back! Can still remember the first time when i read ur poem.....golly wad a nostalgic feelin! love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ Seems like yesterday~ I love having you here .... STILL ~  Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Kay Vibbert Junior Member
since 2001-08-25
Posts 35Indiana |
Well, I didn't know this was your first post. It's wonderful!
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