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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
I Cry Not a single tear Too many Shed for you I cry You explain All night long Drowned by sorrow I cry Lost my only love A fear, a battle I can't win I cry For you, for me For love Gone too soon I cry Never there Or always here Half-empty or full I cry Too far gone Or gone too far Goodbye, love I cry No more hope A small cut Tears of blood I cry The end is near You,...are far Lost love I cry Fear tomorrow Departed today All is gone I cry I won't miss you Because I had YOU A short while, still I cry Alicia A. Renzelman |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is fabulous, Alicia! That's exactly what it feels like. Very good writing! Denise |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
this is very good..like the repeating theme..looking forward to more, Alicia.. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Alicia, Lovely poem; Good writing, but dry them tears up....hope your stay here makes you happy again. Love, Marcy |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
You've put this so well, great job on the poem. I won't miss you Because I had YOU A short while, still I cry |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
the way you wrote each verse I had to catch my breath...so the effect was great... ~~spft hugs Maureen |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Alicia~ Hope things cheer up a bit ! 'Never there Or always here Half-empty or full I cry' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Alicia, A much needed reminder from a fellow pub friend. Hope you are able to dry your tears soon. You'll always have lots of friends here at the Pub. Dawn |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Callie, thanks so much, I found one set of friends here once, though it seems they've all disappeared. Hope to find the same in y'all. Lakewalker, that is one of my favorite verses too, thanks. Marge, I felt this expressed the sorrow I was feeling at the time, more pessimistic than optimistic. Thank you all so very much! I would be lost without your caring nature and the love you all show me! Alicia |
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